Hump Day Hook

humpdayhookThis is a weekly blog hop that happens every Wednesday–Hump Day–where authors can showcase and share their work. Find other delightful hooks HERE.

This week’s hook comes from my Naughty Nursery Rhyme, WEE WILLIE WINKIE, up for pre-sale now at Breathless Press. Releases Friday 2/8! Today, Willie and Fredrick exchange a kiss.

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Fredrick groaned as lust swamped his deweewilliewinkie 200x300fenses; his cock swelled to life for its lover, ached for the touch it had missed for too many lonely nights. He returned William’s kiss with fervor, forgetting where they were, his position, everything but the need to taste again this man he loved with all his being.

William broke off their kiss and leaned against the table, his chest heaving. They stared at it each other while Fredrick caught his breath. Dearest Lord! William stood before him, everything he desired in life, intelligent and beautiful. His full lips glistened with their kiss. Mine! Fredrick’s heart broke while agony twisted in his gut. He had nothing to offer the eldest son of one of New England’s finest families. He’d known that three years ago. Nothing had changed his circumstances.

About diannehartsock

Author of paranormal/suspense, fantasy/adventure, m/m romance and anything else that comes to mind. Oh, and a floral designer.
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15 Responses to Hump Day Hook

  1. Beautifully sensual. I love it. Must read this. 😉

  2. Lacie says:

    Wonderful! Great job.

  3. Jessica Subject says:

    Such a sensual kiss! He may think nothing has changed, but I think everything has after that kiss. Congrats on your upcoming release! 🙂

  4. Paloma Beck says:

    Everything has changed, definitely. I can nearly feel it myself.

  5. I can feel his angst. Hopefully the beauty of the reality will help to assuage it. Interesting characters and situation.

  6. Elin Gregory says:

    Congratulations! And such a sexy kiss

  7. Sad and sensual. I feel his sorrow at not feeling good enough.

  8. sue says:

    I hope things change for the better 😀

  9. naomi says:

    Sensual hook with sadness woven through. I love it 🙂

  10. Aww I hope he changes his mind about that!

  11. Sherry Gloag says:

    Very sensual, and, right now, very sad.

  12. Gem says:

    Wonderful kiss making the internal angst even more poignant. Will definitely look for more of the story.

  13. C.R. Moss says:

    ooh, sensual. good hook! 🙂 C.

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