It’s #snippetsunday!

snippetsunday2Welcome to Snippet Sunday! It’s the weekly event when authors post 8 to 10 lines of things they are writing, editing, querying, or for which they’re obsessively checking sales figures! You can find the other snippets HERE.

This week I’m continuing with my fantasy novel. Kavi feels better but the company is growing restless.

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Without thought he lurched forward and seized Kavi’s mocking lips in a hard kiss. “We’re not done here,” he muttered. There was unfinished business between them.

A flame smoldered in Kavi’s dark eyes. “I concur,” he murmured, running his tongue slowly over his bottom lip as if savoring Nathan’s taste.

Heart pounding, Nathan rose to his feet as the camp stirred, and went to see if the Magus needed anything. They packed in short order, deciding to eat from their provisions as they traveled. It was a three day journey to Nagal and the Magus seemed restless to be off. Bryon took the prisoner in front of him on his horse, Landlan quiet and docile, not fooling anyone.


About diannehartsock

Author of paranormal/suspense, fantasy/adventure, m/m romance and anything else that comes to mind. Oh, and a floral designer.
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12 Responses to It’s #snippetsunday!

  1. siobhanmuir says:

    Oh ho, “to be continued.” Fun snippet, Dianne. 🙂

  2. Great snippet. I want more.

  3. P.T. Wyant says:

    Tease! (And I’m not sure if I’m talking about you, Nathan, or Kavi. LOL)

  4. Very smooth and definitely leaves me wanting more! Excellent snippet…

  5. jtsuruoka says:

    “…not fooling anyone.” Very effective way to end the snippet. Nice work!

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