Welcome to Snippet Sunday! It’s the weekly event when authors post 8 to 10 lines of things they are writing, editing, querying, or for which they’re obsessively checking sales figures! You can find the other snippets HERE.
This week I’m continuing with my fantasy novel. Kavi feels better but the company is growing restless.
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Without thought he lurched forward and seized Kavi’s mocking lips in a hard kiss. “We’re not done here,” he muttered. There was unfinished business between them.
A flame smoldered in Kavi’s dark eyes. “I concur,” he murmured, running his tongue slowly over his bottom lip as if savoring Nathan’s taste.
Heart pounding, Nathan rose to his feet as the camp stirred, and went to see if the Magus needed anything. They packed in short order, deciding to eat from their provisions as they traveled. It was a three day journey to Nagal and the Magus seemed restless to be off. Bryon took the prisoner in front of him on his horse, Landlan quiet and docile, not fooling anyone.
Oh ho, “to be continued.” Fun snippet, Dianne. 🙂
It does take a while for these two to come together. 🙂
Great snippet. I want more.
More on the way Cecilia! 🙂
Tease! (And I’m not sure if I’m talking about you, Nathan, or Kavi. LOL)
🙂 Glad you like it!
Very smooth and definitely leaves me wanting more! Excellent snippet…
Thanks so much, Veronica! I like writing these two.
“…not fooling anyone.” Very effective way to end the snippet. Nice work!
Thanks Jt! It’s hard to find just one little snippet out of a scene to post. 🙂
Great snippet.
Thanks for stopping in, Iris!